The Lottery Ticket

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Lottomeister — Thu, 14 Jul 2016 23:59:11 GMT

Rose are red,

violets are Blue

Don't buy a ticket

And save your money.

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destinycreation — Thu, 14 Jul 2016 23:38:42 GMT

I just figured out that this is a lottery poem that rhymes in certain places. However, it is hard to read, b/c it is lacking in punctuation ! You left out periods.

Just a suggestion ....

Proper punctuation makes your threads easier to understand

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helpmewin — Thu, 14 Jul 2016 23:30:57 GMT

Good Luck to you this week

The Lottery Ticket

larrybb57 — Thu, 14 Jul 2016 03:22:59 GMT

Buy a lottery ticket then hope for the best,our chances of winning the same as the rest Only six numbers required, that's all it takes Dreams of a very few achieve that lucky breaks I've so near but so far my familiar tale Every week that goes by yet again I shall fail I now have six numbers all six numbers are mine I achieve it each week but not on the same line I'm destined to work to earn my daily bread Riches don't bring happiness so it's been said My ticket brings me hops as i mark off my c... [ More ]